[Nightmare]

Okay.. thanks to sis, I now have an index as well (thanks again sis, even if you said 'no need to thank me'!!)..
Index

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So, here is my first poem to be posted here! Hope you all like it!


The Apocalypse

The flames of hatred
Will run freely across the skies
The wings of the protector
Will not be able to shield its loved ones from it

Gaia’s funeral pyre
Will be ignited
All souls will be granted
Sleep eternal in heaven or hell

A world of fear
Of death and destruction
This is a reflection
Of my true feelings

The End will come
Worlds will be destroyed
The fires of hatred
Will destroy the blue skies
And rivers will turn to blood…

This post has been edited by Nightmare: 17 August 2004 - 01:21 PM

[Eyes on me]

It's still good!!
Yes... hihi... I already read it guys... She has so many awesome poems!!
Just wait and see...

Just post them here from now on, Nightmare...

[dalian]

Scary...but good.

Keep the poems comin.

I like your avvy.

This post has been edited by Iwishchocoboswerereal: 01 March 2004 - 10:15 PM

[Nightmare]

Okay, thanks for all the compliments. You're all too kind, lol But here's a new poem:


Dreams

Dreams could never fool me
I have learnt that from the one person who mattered to me
You, and you alone
How you could see through them
Is still a mystery

You’ve been through too much
As have I
Even a dream of happiness
Hurt your heart
As it hurt mine

They’ll haunt you forever
The dreams that have been and will come
A thousand dreams
A thousand days of misery
A dream is a nightmare to me

[Eyes on me]

So sad... But oh so good!!
That ending is amazing...

You know... I told her to go with the screen name: Dreams
But she found that too goody goody...

[Nightmare]

Thank you! You are so kind!.
And I did thought the name 'Dreams' was 'too goody goody', as you put it. I'm no angel, and I don't feel like one, so 'Nightmare' was the oposite of what she thought. But that's beside the point. Here's another poem:

Confused II

Please stay/go away
Please leave me alone/love me
Please let go/hold on
Please touch me/keep away from me

I am so confused
I don’t know if I
Should love you or hate you
If only I could make up my mind…

Why can’t you help me?
My mind is like a loop
Round and round and round
When will it stop?!
When will I know who I am?!

[Eyes on me]

No no no!!
You can't just post 'Confused II' without letting them read 'Confused' first!!
But the poem is truly awesome!
The way you use the opposites the whole time....
You really are still confused, girl!!

[Nightmare]

Hmm, guess I should have used 'Confused' as my name, lol
But if you insist, here is Confused:

Confused

Who am I?
Who are you?
Do I know you?
Were you truly a friend?

Or were you a demon?
Someone who betrayed me
I don’t know
I am so confused…

How will I find my way out of this?
Is this a never-ending spiral of downfall?
Am I crazed?
Am I still me?

Ever since you left
I have become a different person
I have changed the way I looked
I even changed my handwriting!

I am a whole new person
But am I still me…?

[dalian]

Quote

Do I know you?
Were you truly a friend?

Or were you a demon?

Some sad poems there.

This post has been edited by Iwishchocoboswerereal: 02 March 2004 - 08:23 PM

[The Unknown]

Great poems So far "The Apocalypse" is my favorite.

Keep 'em coming

[Eyes on me]

Maybe so, Nightmare...
But that poem still rocks... So deep confusement in it... That ending still gets me...

And I wanna know how you did that!?!?
The Unknown posted at your poems...
You have to feel special now!!

[Corvinus]

that was pretty amasing!! I like the wording a lot.

[Nightmare]

Iwishchocoboswerereal: I only write sad poems. They are the poems that work for me...

Eyes On Me: I just wrote it. I thought it would look nice, so I wrote it. No searching for words. They just came to me. And now I do feel special, lol

The rest of you guys: THANK YOU!